Searria H.

As I read through the poem the first time, I thought that the tone was sort of sad. The second time I read it, I found that the first stanza ...

I liked this! I have no clue what a sonnet is, but it was a wonderful poem all the same! I agree with Elizabeth. :D By the way, Happy birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(It's ...

Firstly, I had no clue what was going on, but that's how most of my stories start. :oops: I sat down awkwardly perfect How can something be awkwardly perfect? and ...

I Looooove Squirrels!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was a funny poem, and I really enjoyed it! :D I was sort of Horrified at the last line :wink: :shock:

I know you want me to make a good comment, but I can't think of anything to say. Once again, I think this is really good. I like your choice ...

What is the "mamma willow?" you keep talking about it, and all we know is that it's a tree of some kind. Obviously, the two sisters have named it, but ...

This kind of confused me. :? Mabe that's because I'm only eleven. I liked the parts that I understood though. Keep writing! :)

I thought that this would be a very depressing poem when I read the first part. When I got to the end, I found that it was kind of sweet. ...